So I finished reading the weird action trhiller from moonstone, the company that brought us Princess Evangile and Lunatics. Aka, an action thriller from a generic moege company. And boy, does it have issues. Honestly, reading it the story is alright, I have no major issues with the core ideas. The surrounding details are horrible though. Enough that I wanted to complain a bit, if only to cement the thoughts.
In order, I’m going to talk about how Mahoro’s character could be removed without hurting anything, how most of the routes are pointless, and finally why the timing of everything is just bad. Or more like, makes no sense.
